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What’s your favorite part of having a friend stay over at your house?

임주미/2024-12-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

When my friends or siblings stay over at my house, I always I preper various food a lot of fruit ane wine. They really love my dishes ,we usually chat untill nighr. I like these time also I am feeling happy.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ju Mi! I could imagine a fun, exciting night! ^^ Thank you for sharing your insights. Always take care and stay warm.

~T. Jewel

When my friends or siblings stay over at my house, I always I preper various food a lot of fruit ane wine.

>>When my friends or siblings stay over at my house, I always prepare various foods, a lot of fruit, and wine.
They really love my dishes ,we usually chat untill nighr.

>>They really love my dishes, and we usually chat until night.
I like these time also I am feeling happy.

>>I like these times, and I am also feeling happy.

>>I enjoy these moments and feel happy, too.