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회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Yes, i do. i like to observe other people. Becasue when i obsercve other people, i discover new inspiration.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Jun!

Thanks for doing your homework.

Here's somthing you need to note that when youa re writing your sentences, be mindlful of your capitalization and spelling.

Have fun learning!

T. Aki~

Yes, i do

>>> Yes, I do

i like to observe other people.

>> I like to observe other people.

Becasue when i obsercve other people,

>>> Because when I observe other people,

i discover new inspiration.

>> I discover new inspiration.