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I think the most people take a nap in the middle of that afternoon is the most people is very get up early. So they are sleepy in the afternoon.

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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please go over the revisions given below. See you later!

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Jean~~

Why do you think that most people take a nap in the middle of that afternoon?

I think the most people take a nap in the middle of that afternoon is the most people is very get up early.

>> I think the reason that most people take a nap in the middle of that afternoon is that most of them get up early.

So they are sleepy in the afternoon.

>> CORRECT~~