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Write about your most memorable Friday.

차유진/2024-12-08

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Last Friday is most memorable Friday for me because I don't have most memorable Friday the reason is Friday it's the same everyday. So I'm sad 😥 so I want special Friday.
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Last Friday is most memorable Friday for me because I don't have most memorable Friday the reason is Friday it's the same everyday.
>> Last Friday was the most memorable for me because I don't have the most memorable Friday since Friday is the same every day.

So I'm sad 😥 so I want special Friday.
>> So I'm sad that's why I want a special Friday. 
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