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Please change difficult words to easy words and correct them so that IELTS Speaking 6.5 or higher sc

이영인/2024-12-08

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What do you dislike about teamwork? What do you learn from working in a team? Have you teamed up with someone else before? I dislike when some members of a team don’t contribute equally, which can affect the whole group’s progress. However, I enjoy teamwork when everyone is committed and I’ve learned that good communication and collaboration are key to success. Did you ever go fishing when you were a child? Do you like fishing? Is fishing popular in your country? I didn’t go fishing much as a child, but I do enjoy it occasionally. I like eating fish, especially grilled or in soups. Fishing is quite popular in my country, particularly in coastal areas. Do you spend a lot of money on buying perfume? Do you send perfume to others as a gift? Where do you spray perfume? Do you use perfume? I don’t spend much money on perfume, but I occasionally buy it as a gift for others. I like to spray perfume on my wrists and neck,and I do enjoy using it because it makes me feel fresh and confident

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Thank you for entrusting me to simplify your answers Young In. I hope you'll be able to remember all these responses. Good luck!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
What do you dislike about teamwork?
What do you learn from working in a team?
Have you teamed up with someone else before?
>>>I dislike when some team members don't contribute equally, as it affects the group's progress. I enjoy teamwork when everyone is committed, and good communication is key to success.

Did you ever go fishing when you were a child?
Do you like fishing?
Is fishing popular in your country?
>>>I didn't go fishing that much as a child, but I enjoy it occasionally. I like eating fish, especially grilled or in soups. Fishing is popular in my country, especially in coastal areas.
Do you spend a lot of money on buying perfume?
Do you send perfume to others as a gift?
Where do you spray perfume?
Do you use perfume?
>>>I don't spend much on perfume, but I occasionally buy it as a gift. I like spraying it on my wrists and neck, and it makes me feel fresh and confident.