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이연숙/2024-12-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Question: Which is more important in school to be hard-working student or smart? And why? Answer: Hard working is more important. Because When we have hard working, we will be smart.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Keep going Belle, you got this. T. Linda
Hard working is more important. Because When we have hard working, we will be smart.

>>> Hard work is more important because it helps us become smarter.