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차진혁/2024-12-05

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I think the best transportation when go on a trip with friends is train because train is very fast. So very fast reach our destination.

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What's the best transportation when you go on a trip with friends?

I think the best transportation when go on a trip with friends is train because train is very fast. So very fast reach our destination.

>> I think the best transportation when we go on a trip with friends is the train because it's very fast so we can reach our destination early.