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박소은/2024-12-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I want a good country like there is no war in future and there is no fight with my friends.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sunny!

This is a good example.

I'm happy to read your work.

Keep it up!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I want a good country like there is no war in future and there is no fight with my friends.

>> I want a good country where there is no war in the future and there are no fights with my friends.