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오소민/2024-12-04

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I think the effective way is words. It's because if I get some actions as I angry, it can become fighting.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ridoria! That's a good point. We do not want anything to turn into violence.

-T. Sonny

I think the effective way is words.

>>I think the most effective way is through words.

It's because if I get some actions as I angry, it can become fighting.

>>It's because if I do some actions when I am angry, it can turn into a fight.