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류영주/2024-12-04

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Q: What is the most thrilling experience you've ever had? A: I think the most thrilling experience I had was riding roller coaster in an amusement park. I don't actually have much thrilling experience yet because I haven't lived a lot, and I don't really have much chance. Actually, it wasn't also that thrilling riding a roller coaster, but I think there is no more thrilling experience than that.

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Hello, Paul!

I can understand how you feel! Sometimes, we don't have many chances for thrilling experiences, especially when we're still exploring the world. It’s totally normal for a roller coaster ride to not feel as intense as expected, especially if you’ve never had much of a chance to experience things that push your limits. It sounds like you're looking forward to having more exciting experiences in the future, and I bet you'll find something that will really give you that rush! It's great that you're open to new adventures when the opportunity arises.

~ Trixia

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I think the most thrilling experience I had was riding roller coaster in an amusement park.

- The most exciting experience I've had was riding a roller coaster at an amusement park.

I don't actually have much thrilling experience yet because I haven't lived a lot, and I don't really have much chance.

- I haven't had many thrilling experiences yet because I feel like I haven't lived fully, and I haven't had many opportunities to do so.

Actually, it wasn't also that thrilling riding a roller coaster, but I think there is no more thrilling experience than that.

- Honestly, the roller coaster ride wasn't as intense as I expected, but I still think it was the most exhilarating moment I've experienced so far.