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김재현/2024-12-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Hi Teacher Divina, Happy Wednesday, Thank you for giving me homework Homework What kind of accommodation do you like to stay in when you travel? My answer I want to stay at room of someone's house when I go to Canada. Because I talk about Canada with homeowner or other people and Can learn about it to them.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I want to stay at room of someone's house when I go to Canada.
>>I want to stay in a room of someone's house when I go to Canada.

2. Because I talk about Canada with homeowner or other people and Can learn about it to them.
>>It's because I can talk about Canada with the homeowner or other people, and I can learn from them.


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