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Have you ever had to step in and help during a difficult time for a family member? What did you do?

이진태/2024-12-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If my family face difficult time, I should give a help to family. Even there is nothing I can do, I should help my family. That's what family are.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

If my family face difficult time, I should give a help to family.
>> If my family faces a difficult time, I should help them.

Even there is nothing I can do, I should help my family.
>> Even if there is nothing I can do, I should still try to support my family. 

That's what family are.
>> That’s what family is all about.
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