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How much time do you spend outdoors every week?

이진태/2024-12-04

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I spend time outdoors only commuting time. It's about three hours for a day. Sometimes I go to the outdoor on weekend to enjoy.

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Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I spend time outdoors only commuting time. It's about three hours for a day.
>> I spend time outdoors only when commuting, which takes about three hours a day.

Sometimes I go to the outdoor on weekend to enjoy.
>> Sometimes, I go outdoors on weekends to enjoy myself.