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김나라/2024-12-04

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing task: Which is more effective in expressing how you feel: Words or Actions? Answer: When I'm in bad mood, I think it's ususally better to write than to act.Because sometimes I can threaten the other person. But, when I'm happy, I usually express it through my actions! It has a bigger impact than words.
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Hello, Ms. Nala! I agree with you. Acting when you’re in a bad mood, especially impulsively, can often lead to saying or doing things that you might regret later. 
-T. Sonny
When I'm in bad mood, I think it's ususally better to write than to act.
>>When I'm in a bad mood, I prefer to write my thoughts down rather than act on them.
Because sometimes I can threaten the other person.
>>I sometimes feel the urge to threaten others
But, when I'm happy, I usually express it through my actions! 
>>Correct!
It has a bigger impact than words.
>>It has a stronger impact than words.
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