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What are your thoughts on the bus stations of your country?

차진혁/2024-12-03

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I think my country bus stations is great because my country bus stations is very clean. And not buy a bus ticket.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's another corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Enjoy the rest of the evening! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                    What are your thoughts on the bus stations of your country?


I think my country bus stations is great because my country bus stations is very clean.
>> I think my country has great bus stations because they are very clean. 

And not buy a bus ticket.
>> And we don't have to buy bus tickets. 
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