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How does a young boy like you take care of your skin?

차유진/2024-12-03

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The young boy take care of skin is washing fash and need to apply lotion well. But I think the reason why the young boy has good skin because young boy has young skin. (I don't even know what I'm saying)
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Here's your correced composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good evening! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                     

                               How does a young boy like you take care of your skin?


The young boy take care of skin is washing fash and need to apply lotion well.
>> A young boy like me takes care of my skin by washing my face and applying lotion well.

But I think the reason why the young boy has good skin because young boy has young skin.
>> But I think the reason that a young boy has good skin is because young people naturally have young-looking skin. 

(I don't even know what I'm saying)
>> CORRECT~~
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