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김재현/2024-12-03

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Hi Teacher Divina, Happy Tuesday!!! Thank you for giving me homework Homework What happens when a person doesn't get enough chance to travel? My answer I think I only go on a short trip but I think I will be precious for a short time. Sometimes, I think short trip can be advantage.

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Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think I only go on a short trip but I think I will be precious for a short time.

>>I think I only go on a short trip, but I think it will be precious even for a short time.

2. Sometimes, I think short trip can be advantage.

>>Sometimes, I think short trips can have the advantage.