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If you could meet any movie character, who would it be and why?

임주미/2024-12-03

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If I have a chance to meet movie chacter,I would like to see "Joung woo-soung I like him for a long time.Recently he became a father as son. He didn't want to get married but be a farther.also he won't marry son's mother The news is suprised many fans and someone blame him a lot. I still like him and support

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Hello, Ju Mi! Ohhh. I know him. I’ve watched several of his movies. He’s a good actor, and he’s handsome, too! Thank you for sharing your ideas. Have a a good day and enjoy!

~T. Jewel

If I have a chance to meet movie chacter,I would like to see "Joung woo-soung

>>If I had a chance to meet a movie character, I would like to meet Jung Woo-sung.
I like him for a long time.

>>I have liked him for a long time.

Recently he became a father as son.

>>Recently, he became a father to a son.
He didn't want to get married but be a farther.

>>He didn't want to get married, but he wanted to be a father.

also he won't marry son's mother.

>>Also, he won't marry his son's mother.

The news is suprised many fans and someone blame him a lot.

>>The news surprised many fans, and some people blamed him a lot.
I still like him and support

>>I still like him and support him.