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김순님/2024-12-03

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It depends on situation. If the restaurant is near my neighborhood , I can easily search the other ones which has the menu that I want to eat. But the other case , I will order the other menu. I don't want to waste of time to find a new restaurant.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good day, Ms. Sunny!
Some people know what they want. My best friend's older sister has a bad personality if she came to that restaurant and her order was not available, she would stand up and leave. I sometimes admire her for being courageous but if I am with her, I feel embarrassed. I wonder if she only has one "palate" for food, but I understand that when she eats, she should be satisfied.
Have a good day!
Aki~

It depends on situation.
>>> It depends on the situation.

If the restaurant is near my neighborhood , I can easily search the other ones which has the menu that I want to eat.
>>> If the restaurant is within my neighborhood, I can easily search for the other ones that have the menu that I want to eat.

But the other case , I will order the other menu.
>>> But in the other case, I will order the other menu.
 
I don't want to waste of time to find a new restaurant.
>>> I don't want to waste time finding another restaurant.
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