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김재현/2024-12-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Hi Teacher Divina, Happy Monday. Thank you for giving me homework. Homework. Which is more important, eating well or working out ? Why? Which are important both So I don' choose one Because we can get energy by eating, So the energy can exercise harder well. We can keep health by exercising.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. Which are important both So I don' choose one

>>Both as important because I couldn't choose one.

2. Because we can get energy by eating, So the energy can exercise harder well.

>>We can get energy by eating, and this energy can be used to exercise harder.

3. We can keep health by exercising.

>>We can keep ourselves health by exercising.