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Write about Christmas days plans.

차진혁/2024-12-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My Christmas plans is decorations the Christmas cake. And I rechive gift from Santa claus. So I always stay at home.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Enjoy your Christmas Day with your family! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                       

                               

                                   Write about Christmas day plans.


My Christmas plans is decorations the Christmas cake. And I rechive gift from Santa Claus.
>> My Christmas plans are to decorate a Christmas cake and receive a gift from Santa Clause. 

So I always stay at home.
>> So I'll stay home only.
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