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29Nov2024 Homework

김나라/2024-12-02

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing task: Would you rather be a leader or a follower? Answer: I don't think deserve to be a leader because a leader has to be decisive, but I am very swayed by person and have very difficulty in making decisions. So I think follower is better than leader.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. Nala! I think decisiveness is a critical quality a leader must have. But also, it is important to be open to and considerate of your followers' opinions in the decision process.

-T. Sonny

I don't think deserve to be a leader because a leader has to be decisive, but I am very swayed by person and have very difficulty in making decisions.

>>I don’t believe I deserve to be a leader because leadership requires decisiveness, and I tend to be easily influenced by others, making decision-making challenging for me.

So I think follower is better than leader.

>>So I think being a follower is better than being a leader.