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Taiwanese culture

양기연/2024-12-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
According to the guide, most of people are Taoists. That's why there are many Taoist temples not Buddhist ones. But he added that recently the number of Christians was gradually increasing. One more interesting thing is that some of them are very Japanese-friendly. Unlike us, Korean people, they think Japanese military helped them with education or development. I don't understand their thoughts and attitudes towards Japanese occupation. That's why we can see many Japanese products there.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Gi Yean!
I see! While reading your homework, I was also wondering if Taoism is similar to Confucianism since both are Chinese philosophies. Upon reading more, the main difference that caught my attention was that Taoism values spontaneity and non-action, whereas Confucianism stresses structured behavior and moral education. This then reminded me of your story where Taiwanese people don't want to learn and develop much.
- T. Caitlyn 
According to the guide, most of people are Taoists. 
>> According to the guide, most people are Taoists.
That's why there are many Taoist temples not Buddhist ones. 
>> That's why there are many Taoist temples instead of Buddhist ones.
But he added that recently the number of Christians was gradually increasing. 
>> CORRECT
One more interesting thing is that some of them are very Japanese-friendly. 
>> CORRECT
Unlike us, Korean people, they think Japanese military helped them with education or development. 
>> Unlike us Koreans, they think the Japanese military helped them with education or development.
I don't understand their thoughts and attitudes towards Japanese occupation. 
>> CORRECT
That's why we can see many Japanese products there.
>> CORRECT
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