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What are your thoughts on shopaholics?

차유진/2024-12-01

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I think shopaholic is neither good nor bad because some people when shop feel fun so shopaholic is good. The bed things is going to spend too much money.
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                                 What are your thoughts on shopaholics?


I think shopaholic is neither good nor bad because some people when shop feel fun so shopaholic is good.
>> I think a shopaholic is neither good nor bad because some people find it fun when they shop. 

The bed things is going to spend too much money.
>> The bad thing is spending too much money.

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