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양윤영/2024-11-29

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I don’t think about that… If I have a talent, I want to speak in a multilingual language. I learning an English and I want to learn Chinese too a later. I’m study English very hard now.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Yun!
I'm sure someday you can learn both languages and be fluent in speaking them. I'm cheering for you! See you next week! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

I don’t think about that…
>>CORRECT!
If I have a talent, I want to speak in a multilingual language.
>>If I could be talented at something, I want to learn how to speak in multiple languages.
I learning an English and I want to learn Chinese too a later.
>>I'm learning English and I want to learn Chinese later too. 
I’m study English very hard now.
>>I’m studying English very hard now.
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