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A) In the past, my hobbies were reading, drawing. men's choir, writing, and playing classical guitar. It seems that most of them were static activities. Looking back at myself in elementary and middle school, I liked soccer very much, and when I was in elementary school student, I was a school soccer player. Most of the hobbies I enjoyed as an adult, I started hobbies when I felt that my life was stagnant and I needed to change. Through such hobby activities, I discover another talent of myself and these motivate me in life. Whatever we do, over time, our work falls into mannerism. I also lost the importance of my treatment and lost the appreciation of my life as a dentist because I have been doing dental work for a long time. However, through these hobbies, I look back on my life and reorient myself. When I have passion and goals through hobbies, I will become passionate about my job again and strive for better dental treatment. My hobbies and jobs are always growing together.
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In the past, my hobbies were reading, drawing. men's choir, writing, and playing classical guitar.
>> In the past, my hobbies were reading, drawing, men's choir, writing, and playing classical guitar.

It seems that most of them were static activities.
>> CORRECT

Looking back at myself in elementary and middle school, I liked soccer very much, and when I was in elementary school student, I was a school soccer player.
>> Looking back at myself in elementary and middle school, I liked soccer very much, and when I was an elementary school student, I was a school soccer player.

Most of the hobbies I enjoyed as an adult, I started hobbies when I felt that my life was stagnant and I needed to change.
>> Most of the hobbies I enjoyed as an adult, I started when I felt that my life was stagnant and I needed to change.

Through such hobby activities, I discover another talent of myself and these motivate me in life.
>> Through such hobby activities, I discover other talents within myself, and these motivate me in life.

Whatever we do, over time, our work falls into mannerism.
>> CORRECT

I also lost the importance of my treatment and lost the appreciation of my life as a dentist because I have been doing dental work for a long time.
>> I also lost the importance of my treatment and lost the appreciation of my life as a dentist because I had been doing dental work for a long time.

However, through these hobbies, I look back on my life and reorient myself.
>> CORRECT

When I have passion and goals through hobbies, I will become passionate about my job again and strive for better dental treatment.
>> When I have passion and goals through hobbies, I become passionate about my job again and strive for better dental treatment.

My hobbies and jobs are always growing together.
>> My hobbies and job are always growing together.