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Locals in Taiwan

양기연/2024-11-29

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I think they don't care travelers and a little indifferent to foreigners. They don't make efforts to communicate with visitors. They cannot speak English at all and they aren't willing to use translator in smartphones. I have a tough time communicating with local people even in some restaurants.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Gi Yean!
It's very unfortunate to hear about this experience of yours. I think these kinds of situations can make foreigners or travelers feel uncomfortable and unwelcome. I mean, preserving one's culture is good, but being open to learning and progress, especially in language, can be really beneficial for them.
- T. Caitlyn
I think they don't care travelers and a little indifferent to foreigners. 
>> I think they don't care about travelers and are a little indifferent to foreigners.
They don't make efforts to communicate with visitors. 
>> CORRECT
They cannot speak English at all and they aren't willing to use translator in smartphones. 
>> They cannot speak English at all, and they aren't willing to use translators on their smartphones.
I have a tough time communicating with local people even in some restaurants.
>> CORRECT
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