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What are your thoughts on online shopping?
차유진/2024-11-28
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I think the good things about online shopping is that is comfortable and cheap but the bed thing is it takes long time.
But I like online shopping because online shopping has a lot of good things( ＾▽＾)
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Here's your correced composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good night sleep! 
Cheers,
Jean~~
What are your thoughts on online shopping?
I think the good things about online shopping is that is comfortable and cheap but the bed thing is it takes long time.
>> I think the good things about online shopping are that is comfortable and cheap but the bad thing is that delivery takes a long time.
But I like online shopping because online shopping has a lot of good things
>> But I like online shopping because I can find a lot of good things.
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