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김나라/2024-11-28

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing task: What kind of ambitions did you have as a child? Answer: As a child I had ambitions was o become a doctor because their the gown looked nice. But I realise as I grew older very difficult becoming a dorctor. So I gave up becoming doctor very easy.

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Hello, Ms. Nala! For me, I don't know why but I have never dreamt of becoming a doctor. I guess, it already appeared difficult for me ever since I was a child.

-T. Sonny

As a child I had ambitions was o become a doctor because their the gown looked nice.

>>As a child, I had an ambitions of becoming a doctor because their gowns looked nice.
But I realise as I grew older very difficult becoming a dorctor.

>>But I realized as I grew older that it was very difficult to become a doctor.

So I gave up becoming doctor very easy.

>>So, I gave up becoming a doctor very easily.

OR. I backed out of becoming a doctor without much thought.