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How would your life be different without access to technology?

이진태/2024-11-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
After Industrial Revolution, human's life style was changed completely. If I can't access any technology, I still live like a my ancestor, I would still farm with cow.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello! I'm so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

After Industrial Revolution, human's life style was changed completely.
>> After the Industrial Revolution, human lifestyles changed completely.
If I can't access any technology, I still live like a my ancestor, I would still farm with cow.
>> If I couldn't access any technology, I would live like my ancestors and still farm using cows.


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