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Is the weather in a country important when you choose a place to go? Why?

이진태/2024-11-28

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I tried to choose a country have warm weather, when I choose the vacation places. because, I went to there to enjoy a rest. If it's raining whole day, I would be depressed.

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Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I tried to choose a country have warm weather, when I choose the vacation places. because, I went to there to enjoy a rest.

>> I try to choose countries with warm weather when selecting vacation destinations because I go there to relax.
If it's raining whole day, I would be depressed.

>> If it rains all day, I would feel depressed.