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There seem to be many reasons for making people violent.

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>>People appear to be violent for a variety of reasons.

First, there is a person who is inherently violent.

>> First, there is an inherently violent person.

For example, if you were rasied by parents with violent tendencies, violence would be made to form in the environment and what you learned while being disciplined would be violence.

>> For example, if you were raised by parents with violent tendencies, violence would be made to form in the environment and what you learned while being disciplined would be violence.

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>> For instance, if you were brought up by parents who were aggressive, a violent environment would be created, and you would learn to be violent through discipline.

Second, when something angry happens, it can become violent.

>> Second, when anger occurs, it can become violent.

There may be someone who is normally a good person and then changes from the usual when something angry happens. 

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>> Some people are good at birth, but when they get frustrated, they start acting differently.

But most people are not violent just because they are angry.

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>> Yet other people don't lose their composure when they're frustrated.

Third, when you want to bluff in front of others, you can turn violent.

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>> Third, you can become violent when you want to bluff in front of other people.

This is a lot of cases where men are acting in front of men or women to raise their reputation.

>> There are a lot of cases where men are acting in front of men or women to raise their reputation.

Fourth, because you can act to be recognized by someone.

>> Fourth, you are acting to be recognized by someone.

Gang gangsters and criminals often use impulsive methods like violence to be recognized by someone, which can be dangerous.

>> Gangsters and criminals often use impulsive methods like violence to be recognized by someone, which can be dangerous.

Fifth, you can show violence as a way to express that you are scared.

For example, you can think of it as a case where a very scared person uses violence unknowingly because he or she is terrified as if he or she were unwittingly coming out of the fist.

>> Correct