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Are you curious about your future? Why or why not?

한다연/2024-11-27

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I am so curious about my future. I want to know about my work, my awesome boyfriend, and so on. So I always think about my future. But, I don't live in the fiction. I try to any work harder in present to become a great person in the future. So one of my thoughts is always do myself not to regret in the future. I am so tired nowadays because of harder works, but I believe that these will be the bright lights in the future.

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Doing great Nicole!
Your composition is getting better each day :) Keep it up!
~ T. Demi ^^

I am so curious about my future.

>>CORRECT!

I want to know about my work, my awesome boyfriend, and so on.

CORRECT!

OR>> I want to know my future regarding work, my love life and so much more.

So I always think about my future.

>> CORRECT!

OR>> That's why I always think about my future.

But, I don't live in the fiction.

>> However, I don't live in fantasy.

I try to any work harder in present to become a great person in the future.

>> I try to work harder in the present to become a great person in the future.

So one of my thoughts is always do myself not to regret in the future.

>> One of my guiding principles is to always do my best so that I won’t have regrets later.

I am so tired nowadays because of harder works, but I believe that these will be the bright lights in the future.

>>I’ve been so tired lately because of all the hard work, but I believe it will become a bright light in my future.