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신봉규/2024-11-27

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Just turn off your phone when moment of need. It may not be an easy choice, but it is not a difficult action.

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Hello! I'm so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

Just turn off your phone when moment of need. It may not be an easy choice, but it is not a difficult action.

>> Just turn off your phone in moments of need. It may not be an easy choice, but it is a simple action.

OR >> Simply turn off your phone during crucial moments. While it may not be an easy decision, it’s a straightforward action to take.