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박소은/2024-11-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I feel sleepy. It's because I didn't went school but I need to go to school when it is monday. It is the first time to go to school in that weekend.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sunny!

You explained that well.

You just need to use the correct vocabulary words.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I feel sleepy.

>> Correct
It's because I didn't went school but I need to go to school when it is monday.

>> It's because I don't want to go to school but I need to go to school when it is a Monday.
It is the first time to go to school in that weekend.

>> It's the first day coming back to school after the weekend.