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김순님/2024-11-27

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I've been tried snake's extract 2 years ago. My husband said that was carp extract. My mon fed rats meat to their children. All of truths turned out after longtime. But I know how much they love me. They were not trying to decieve me. It was a good memory to me.
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Ms. Sunny!
Having that kind of experience is exceptional and you just be happy about it. 
Thank you for this!
Aki~


I've been tried snake's extract 2 years ago.
>>> I have tried snake extract 2 years ago.

My husband said that was carp extract.
>>> My husband told me that it was a carp extract.

My mon fed rats meat to their children.
>>> My mom has tried feeding us rats' meat.

All of truths turned out after longtime.
>>> We found out the truth after a long time.

But I know how much they love me.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> But we know that it is one way of showing their love.

They were not trying to decieve me.
>>> They were not trying to deceive me.

It was a good memory to me.
>>>  It was a good memory for me.
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