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What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a sibling?

한다연/2024-11-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
First, I am not lonely. I can hang out with my older sister when I come to my house. Also, when I have problems with my friends or I have worry, I can talk with my sister and solve it. But, there are disadvantages too. I have to do an errand because I am the youngest of the family. And my sister also give me an errand frequently. It is too tired.
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That was a great composition Nicole,
There were only minimal corrections this time. Continue doing a great job! 
~ T. Demi ^^

First, I am not lonely.
>> Not being lonely is the first advantage.
I can hang out with my older sister when I come to my house.
>> I can hang out with my older sister when I come home.
Also, when I have problems with my friends or I have worry, I can talk with my sister and solve it.
>> Also, when I have problems with my friends or worries, I can talk to my sister, and she helps me solve them.
But, there are disadvantages too.
>> CORRECT!
I have to do an errand because I am the youngest of the family.
>> Since I am the youngest in the family, I often have to run errands.
And my sister also give me an errand frequently.
>> My sister also asks me to do errands frequently.
It is too tired.
>> It is too tiring.
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