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What to you think of clouds?

김미소/2024-11-25

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I think that cloud is very good source. When is too hot and suffered by sunlight, cloud hide sun and make us cool. Cloud give us rain sometime so that our plants will drink water enough
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Hi Angela! 

Thanks for sending your homework. 
I think clouds can make people feel relaxed.
I also agree that clouds protects us from too much sunlight.  
It also carries the rain that will supple water. 

Andrea 

I think that cloud is very good source. 
>> I think cloud is for protection.  

When is too hot and suffered by sunlight, cloud hide sun and make us cool. 
>> When it's too hot, clouds will hide the sun and makes it a little cool. 

Cloud give us rain sometime so that our plants will drink water enough.
>> Clouds also give rain for our plants to have enough source of water. 


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