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I was busy. i like to buy kimbap and eat. I thank kimbap to be good for my body. because protein. vegetable . carbohydrate all eat once.

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Happy Friday, Michelle!

I also like eating gimbap, and I agree, it's a food that you can buy and eat when you are on the go. However, I also tried making gimbap and I realized it is a lot of work to make, so nowadays, I prefer to just buy it.

- T. Caitlyn

I was busy. i like to buy kimbap and eat.

>> I like to buy kimbap and eat it when I'm busy.
I thank kimbap to be good for my body. because protein. vegetable . carbohydrate all eat once.

>> I think kimbap is good for my body because it contains protein, vegetables, and carbohydrates all at once.