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20nov2024-homework

김나라/2024-11-22

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Writing task: How often do you go shopping for clothes? Do you buy new clothes when the season changes? Answer: Usaully I bought new clothes when new season, but I always window shopping because I will checking trend. And If it's pretty, I put it in my shopping cart. I think about it for a few days and buy it if I don't get out of my mind.

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Hello, Ms. Nala! That's a very good strategy. You only buy something if you can't stop thinking about it. I'll take note of that.

-T. Sonny

Usaully I bought new clothes when new season, but I always window shopping because I will checking trend.

>>Usually I buy new clothes at the start of the new season, but I always do window shopping to check the current fashion trends.

And If it's pretty, I put it in my shopping cart.

>>Correct!

I think about it for a few days and buy it if I don't get out of my mind.

>>I think about it for a few days and buy it if it does not leave my mind.