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If you could make a phone call to any famous person in the world, who would you want it to be?

임주미/2024-11-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I have like awriter his name is Yoo si min(유시민) He was politicain and jouralist. He has been writing several books. I think he is intellectual and storyteller. I learned many things from his books. If I could make a phone call someone, I want to call him. It would be great to me

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Ju Mi! You've chosen a great person to talk to on the phone. I hope you could get this chance to talk to him. ^^ Have a great weekend. See you next week!

~T. Jewel

I have like awriter his name is Yoo si min(유시민)

>>There is a writer whose name is Yoo Si-min.
He was politicain and jouralist.

>>He was a politician and journalist.
He has been writing several books.

>>He has written several books.
I think he is intellectual and storyteller.

>>I think he is an intellectual and a storyteller.

>>I think he is both intelligent and a storyteller.
I learned many things from his books.

>>CORRECT

>>I learned a lot from his books.
If I could make a phone call someone, I want to call him.

>>If I could make a phone call to someone, I would want to call him.
It would be great to me

>>It would be great for me.

>>That would be great.