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Which are the best and worst parts of school?

차유진/2024-11-21

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I think the best part of school is lunch time, after time and break time because students can play a lot and you don't study. And I think the worst part of school is math time because math is boring, hard and not fun so I don't like math.

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Which are the best and worst parts of school?

I think the best part of school is lunch time, after time and break time because students can play a lot and you don't study.

>> I think the best part of school is lunchtime, after-school time, and break time because students can play a lot and don't study.

And I think the worst part of school is math time because math is boring, hard and not fun so I don't like math.

>> And I think the worst part is math time because math is boring, hard, and not fun so I don't like math.