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김재현/2024-11-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Hi Teacher Divina! Happy Thursday. Thank you for giving me homework! Homework How do you start a conversation? My answer When I start a conversation with my friends, I talk the old memories Or ask How are you doing the day. And when I talk other people starting a conversation, I ask usually them How are they doing the day.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. When I start a conversation with my friends, I talk the old memories.

>>When I start a conversation with my friends, I talk about the old memories.

2. Or ask How are you doing the day.

>>I also ask about their day.

3. And when I talk other people starting a conversation, I ask usually them How are they doing the day.

>>When I talk to other people, I usually ask how they're doing.

OR >>When I talk to other people, I usually ask about their day.