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Do you have a favorite person you enjoy calling regularly?
임주미/2024-11-21
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
YES.I have my elder sister always calls me not regulary once or twice a week.
She works in the same as me so we share a lot of things.
Such as economic policy,tax,customer and happening.
She is both a friend and an older sister for a long time.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Ju Mi! It must be great to have someone like your sister. She's always just a phone call away. ^^ Thank you for sharing this today. Enjoy your day!
~T. Jewel
YES. I have my elder sister always calls me not regulary once or twice a week.
>>Yes, my elder sister always calls me, but not regularly—just once or twice a week.
She works in the same as me so we share a lot of things.
She works in the same as me so we share a lot of things.
>>She works in the same field as me, so we share a lot of things.
Such as economic policy,tax,customer and happening.
Such as economic policy,tax,customer and happening.
>>We talk about economic policy, taxes, customers, and current events.
She is both a friend and an older sister for a long time.
She is both a friend and an older sister for a long time.
>>She has been both a friend and an older sister to me for a long time.
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