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What cheers you up when you are sad?

신봉규/2024-11-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I just sleep when I'm not feeling well. When I sleep, I don't think about bad things.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi! I’m so happy you put in the effort to complete the homework. You did a brilliant job sharing your experiences—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I just sleep when I'm not feeling well. When I sleep, I don't think about bad things.
>> I just sleep when I'm not feeling well. When I sleep, I don't think about negative things.