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If you could lean a secret talent…?

오혜영/2024-11-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Hello.Jewel. I attatched a picture. Plz check the file. I had a bad cold, again. So I have to delay the next class. See you next week.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Stella! I would like to fly, too! There's a Korean drama I watched and one of the main characters there had the ability to fly. ^^ Anyway,I hope you're doing great. See you in class next week. Get well soon!
~T. Jewel
If I could learn a secret talent, I would to learn flying to the sky.
>>If I could learn a secret talent, I would like to learn how to fly in the sky.
However,  I don't know how to show it off.
>>CORRECT
Because I learn the secret, secretly, I don't think after showing it off, no more secret.
>>Because I learned the secret secretly, I don't think it would remain a secret after I show it off.
Remaining the skill as secret.
>>I want to keep the skill a secret.
When I feel stress or I'm depressed, I'll spread my wings secretly.
>>When I feel stressed or depressed, I'll spread my wings in secret.
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