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김재현/2024-11-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Hi Teacher, Divina. Happy Wednesday See you tomorrow! Thank you for giving me homework. Homework Why is it important to greet someone well? My answer I think it is important because so I can make relationship with someone and make friends or close people.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

1. I think it is important because so I can make relationship with someone and make friends or close people.
>>It is important because I can have good relationship with someone. I can also make some friends and be close to people.
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