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양윤영/2024-11-20

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I think my ideal date is if I miss him and we meet, go to a good places, go to a cafes and I and you sharing each other’s happy feelings

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Yun!

Thank you for your efforts today. This is so romantic! Haha. See you next time ^^

~~Teacher Kate

I think my ideal date is if I miss him and we meet, go to a good places, go to a cafes and I and you sharing each other’s happy feelings.

>>I think my ideal date is one where if I miss him and we meet, we go to a good place, go to a cafe and we share each other’s happy feelings.