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Would you rather watch a movie or read a book? Why?

이지윤/2024-11-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think it will depend on the situation and mood at that time. But if it a normal situation and feeling, I think I'll read a book. Because I like quiet places, so I go to the library often and I like books as much as reading is one of my hobbies. But you can always choose something else. For example, if a movie I want to watch is released or a movie filmed by a favorite actor is released, I think I will go to see a movie. In addition, I think I will go to the movies even if I am with my friends or in a good mood. However, if I am alone or depressed, I think I will go to the library or bookstore and listen to music and read a books. P.S. I'm worried about my house. I think the company was giving me employee accommodation, but they said there was no empty accommodation available.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun!~

I agree that our preference depends on our mood and situation but most of the time I prefer watching~ Hehehe...

I appreciate when you included a personal note at the end of your composition. I am positively hoping that one will be available for you before your first day ^___^

Chammy

I think it will depend on the situation and mood at that time.

>> I think my mood and situation could affect my preference.

But if it a normal situation and feeling, I think I'll read a book.

>>But if it is a normal situation and feeling, I think I'll read a book.

>> But opt to read on a typical situation.

Because I like quiet places, so I go to the library often and I like books as much as reading is one of my hobbies.

>> Since I like quiet places, I often go to the library and read books as I love it as one of my hobbies.

But you can always choose something else.

>> But I can have other preferences.

For example, if a movie I want to watch is released or a movie filmed by a favorite actor is released, I think I will go to see a movie.

>> For example, if a movie I want to watch is released or a movie filmed by a favorite actor is released, I think I will go to see the movie.

>> For instance, I believe I will go to see a film if it is released or if it was filmed by a favorite actor.

In addition, I think I will go to the movies even if I am with my friends or in a good mood.

>> Furthermore, I think I will enjoy seeing a movie with my friends in a good mood.

However, if I am alone or depressed, I think I will go to the library or bookstore and listen to music and read a books.

>> However, if I am alone or depressed, I think I will go to the library or bookstore and listen to music and read books.

P.S. I'm worried about my house. I think the company was giving me employee accommodation, but they said there was no empty accommodation available.

>> P.S. I'm worried about my house/accommodation. I think the company would provide me, but they said there was nothing available.