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How did you begin studying English?

차유진/2024-11-19

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I studying English because My cousin did it, so I did it too and My mom told me to study English. But I like studying English because it's fun.

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Here's your correced composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. See you soon!

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Jean~~

How did you begin studying English?

I studying English because My cousin did it, so I did it too and My mom told me to study English.

>> I began studying English because my cousin did it that's why I did it, too and my mom told me so.

But I like studying English because it's fun.

>> OR: However, I also like studying English because I find it fun.